Short story

Hi silversurfers: It's 7:11 AM Eastern Standard time. Breakfast
is waiting but I found a short story that I started & I thought it
would be a treat for everyone to play critic. It's a good piece
of literary genius. :)

THE VELVET HAT

" She wore a velvet hat. She walked down the steps slowly,
as if each one were a significant achievement. Her arm, bent
severely at the elbow, pinned to her purse close to her side.
The surface of the last few steps was cracked & uneven, &
so she extended her tiny arm to grip the railing. At that moment
a man ran up & jammed an entire box of peppermints into her mouth."

To be continued?

Tyke...

Why not????

noreen...

What sort of mints John?

Flyiñg Ñuñ 2°°6 +...

Let's hope the one's with the non-fattening centres, for her sake,
noreen.
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